Prelim video feedback

As audience research is very important we thought that we should post our prelim clip on Vanessa's facebook page and ask people to comment on what they liked and what could have been improved .

Tom , a friend of  Vanessa's who does not study media at all commented giving a very descriptive breakdown on what he thought could have been improved and what he liked .

From this comment we've learnt that our title in Hangul(Korean Alphabet) with the English translation is something he likes and that we should defiantly keep that but work on it by making  it longer . Also that maybe it would be more spooky to  make objects like the see saw move just as Kiah is disappearing . Most importantly i learnt that my group needs to add more sound , We had a few technological problems which meant we lost out on time to edit and record sounds for our prelim. However we've learnt from out technological difficulties, and hope to inprove in the final project.